Talk:Emelyn H

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Revisions to be implemented.
métagall — 26-06-2022, 06:54 CET "@lapistar The article in question contains headings of excessive length, some of which contain links. Furthermore, the article contains multiple redundant links some of which are url links to wiki articles, which are to be omitted in favor of hyperlinks. As was already pointed out above, the article contains a redundant list, which is to be omitted in favor of body text. One quote within the article is improperly formatted. Lastly, the article draws a scrollbar, which is caused by the excessively long quote template transclusions. Thereby, the article in question will remain marked for formatting. The article is also written in a narrative, literary style. While this is not relevant to formatting, except in edge cases, you are recommended to write wiki articles in encyclopedic, that is, in a formal, impersonal, and dispassionate style. (edited)

The article's pagename also contains punctuation which is to be omitted. Furthermore, the article inappropriately uses underlined text."


 * (Fixed.) The article in question contains headings of excessive length, some of which contain links.
 * (Fixed). Furthermore, the article contains multiple redundant links some of which are url links to wiki articles, which are to be omitted in favor of hyperlinks.
 * (Fixed.) As was already pointed out above, the article contains a redundant list, which is to be omitted in favor of body text.
 * (Fixed.) One quote within the article is improperly formatted.
 * (Fixed.) Lastly, the article draws a scrollbar, which is caused by the excessively long quote template transclusions.

The article is also written in a narrative, literary style. While this is not relevant to formatting, except in edge cases, you are recommended to write wiki articles in encyclopedic, that is, in a formal, impersonal, and dispassionate style.

To-Do-List

 * Fix the literary style of the page. Apparently it's too emotionally captivating for encyclopaedic use.